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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hahahahahahahahahaha. I hope you don't mind me laughing this hard at your expense. Or, like my elementary school teacher used to say, I'm laughing /with/ you.

No, really, this wasn't as bad as it could have been. Ignoring the spelling mistakes (voldermort?! Lilly?!) and the sentences like "He guessed that was kind of stupid too." and the OHMIGAWD cliffhanger at the end. And the lack of capitol letters. And the typos.


I've seen worse, though, I promise you! It's very hard to believe that the same mind who wrote this would eventually write TAOB and all its genius, but it's actually very inspiring. I mean, if you could start here and end up with one of the most popular stories on the site, then anyone could do anything. Pigs can fly. I can attend Hogwarts. WE CAN HAVE A SPECIAL MAGIC SCHOOL FOR ALL OF HPFF :D

I shall be reading this whenever I need to laugh a little. Thank you for posting. You've /almost/ inspired me to post my first ff. /Almost/

It's worse than this. I promise

I don't know how to end this. I can hardly end it with "lovely one shot!" like I always do. So I'll just leave it here.


Author's Response: I'm fully okay with you laughing at this because, oh my, I can't believe this was actually the result of my typing. Voldermort is a bit of a classic. AH. Who needs capitol letters? MY SPELLING WAS ORIGINAL.

The next chapter was worse. I then paraphrased the entire seventh book to Ginny with no capital letters and awkward sentences. I WAS YOUNG AND FOOLISH.

I was hoping this would be uplifting. LOOK HOW FAR I'VE COME. Admittely, it doesn't take much to improve for this... but its fair to say I managed it.

Even I can admit that :P

Lolololol. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)


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