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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Sigh... it's nice to have a chapter set somewhere other than Malfoy Mannor. Zabini makes me so curious, I really want to know what is going on in that head of his. Also, questions I hope you answer in your upcoming chapters (or in reply to this review if I've missed something obvious) are: why does she have her own dorm at Hogwarts? Who exactly are her parents because she describes them both as her parents but she is a half blood whereas Emily and Scorpious aren't? What is wrong with Helena Zabini? And who is Zabini's 'sibling' - I have always pictured him as a single child? Such an awesome chapter, I love how you mix Astoria's feeling to Zabini, sometimes she is repulsed by the fact he is a pureblood, sometimes he makes her blush and her heart flutter. He is such a gentleman, I wish guys these days were more like him! Anyway, don't make me wait too long for another chapter!


Author's Response: Hello!

Yep, I got tired of Malfoy Manor as well! It was getting rather annoying, I must say. But so much of the story has alot to do with Draco's home so I had to do most of the chapters there. Sorry!
Zabini is a weirdo, isn't he? But I love him, he's really fun to write, but he's rather hard to keep straight, he leads me in all these crazy directions.
Oh, don't worry! All of your questions will get answered, I promise. But I had to set up the later arc of the story but not all of these questions will be answered right away.
It depends on my mood...sorry.
Astoria will tell Zabini why she has her own dorm soon and the mystery about who she is and who her parents really are to her will be known, I promise. Its actually not a very comforting thought.
Zabini, sadly, isn't an only child but I thought that maybe if his mother had been married so much that he would have at least an older sister (Its a girl, just so you know).
Thank you for liking Astoria's weird reaction to Zabini, she's fighting it really hard not to fall for him. But it might be too late on her part (?) and Zabini is so nice and kind, I'd fall in love with him myself! Hahaha.
I wish men were like this now too...sigh. Those were the days, you know? Anyway, I won't make you wait too long. As soon as "Albus Potter and the Dark Lord's Prince" gets validated, I'll post a fresh chapter up.
And after that is "Growth" and after THAT is your "This is Audrey Tang" (I hope you check that out soon to let me know what you think. Gulp.)
Much love,

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