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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Hey I'm here to review your challenge entry!

Considereing that most next gen stories I've seen start out with something like "My name is Mary Sue Hufflepuff, I am witty and sarcastic, and I hate James Potter and his quidditch toned abs, but I actually love him," I could already tell from your title and summary that this was going to be a good one.

Cherry Lou was pretty much the perfect Mary Sue, from her obvious name, to the beauty that everybody notices but her, to the mysterious past and strange connections to canon characters, you've pretty much checked all the boxes.

I love how Albus was the voice of reason but kept getting shut down, and how she was trying way too hard to show how witty and sarcastic she is, but mostly failing.

You also managed to incoporate some pretty common cliches, one of my favorites being the fact that students seem to do just about everything at Hogwarts except go to class. And of course, the witty sarcastic girl got the popular guy in the end, and we got the classic Sco Rose as well.

Great job, and thanks for entering the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you so muuuch! Ah, what a heart-warming review considering I'm about the darkest writer I know. I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for a sick challenge. :)

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