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Review:charlottetrips says:
Interesting. I've heard of these stories out there, dealing with Voldemort's children but haven't had a chance to read them yet. I look forward to learning more about your Tom Riddle III. He's already a bit sure of himself and eager to display his arrogance, but he also was quick to show them the pain he had suffered in growing up and you make mention of other deeper and darker things. The shift was quick and could've had more time added but it wasn't entirely unbelievable.

You've got Dumbledore's compassion right with Crouch's quick trigger finger right. The circumstances under which Dumbledore would have him under his care with all these children about though he is a known murderer and a little heartless is a little dubious but perhaps you expand upon these reasons as the story goes on.

As you can see, you have caught my interest and I'm hoping that you will delve deeper into my notes above as the story progresses. I shall try to stop by again via our BvB Review Battle or some other time!

xChar

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I hope to expand on some of the things you've pointed out specifically the Crouch buisness as for the reason Dumbledore took him in I guess I could try and make it more clear but since Tom was raised by a death eater he didn't really have a choice about the murdering thing. Dumbledore realizes this was coerced and takes pity on Tom so he decides to take him in as he sees a chance to fix Tom's life. Anyway thanks again I hope to stop by at BvB again some time.


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