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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really liked all of the different changes that happen in this chapter. I think you're doing a great job portraying Ron and George.

It's nice to be able to see Ron step up and take some responsibility along with George finally managing to start somewhat living again. I'm feeling the emotions through this chapter just as well as the first one.

I think it flows smoothly and the pace is well balanced. I also didn't see any typos/spelling errors, or confusing sentences.

Overall, I think you did a great job carrying over from your first chapter into this one. I can invision this happening between Ron and George easily.

Keep up the good work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: I think that Ron would be the one most capable of helping George. Not only because they were closest in age, but because of what he did to Harry and Hermione during the hunt for Horcruxes. I'd imagine he would hate feeling like he's abandoning someone he cares about again and would do everything to fix it.

Thank you!

Del<3

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