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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
This was sad. I felt the emotions coming right off of this as I read through it. It made it that more real and believable, because war isn't a grand thing nor is picking up the pieces afterwards.

I could honestly picture that this would be how George would feel after Fred died. He lost his other half, so he has to be able to deal with it in his own way even if it's distructive. I could also believe that Ron would be the one to pick up more on what George was feeling because they did more together because they were close in age.

I did notice one thing that made me a bit curious. You mentioned that everyone has someone besides Charlie, but you never mentioned Percy. Why is that?

I didn't notice any typos/spelling errors or confusing sentences.

Overall, I thought you did a great job taking a moment in time and expressing what I could picture as happening between these two brothers and their family.

Keep up the good work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: ...I never realized I forgot Percy. That's just me, not really liking him, haha. I'll add him and Audrey in :)

I'm so glad that the emotions came off well. Thank you!

Del<3


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