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Review:Miriel says:
Hi there!

Here's Miriel and I came across your stories via the Review Tag thread over at the forums.

This story caught my attention because it's different from the stories about Dom I usually see. In most stories she's young and beautiful, doesn't have sorrows or a dark side. In this case you made her a regretfull elderly woman who looks back on her youth.

Dom seems to be hopless at first, but I think in the end it's her family and her home that give her something to cling to, although she feels as if she wasted her whole life so far. I think that's a nice thought.

The stile you are writing in is fitting, too. Dom's memories are like pieces of a puzzle, they come into her mind without an order. This fact is displayed by your choice of words and sentence structure very well.

All in all, I enjoyed this story a lot!

Miriel

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that was totally what I was going for. I'm so pleased you liked it!

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