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Review:ginweasleypotter says:
So...I like this story, but I'm having a really hard time believing Ginny would act like that. Obviously she would be disappointed, like any parent would be, but I think you are portraying her as being too harsh. I also don't think Harry would allow for her to be treating Lily like that. One last thing, I think Lily should be more scared than anything. You are kind of portraying her as a girl who thinks she's entitled, which is typical for 15, but I don't think typical of a kid who grew up with Harry Potter as their father. Sorry if this seems super harsh, I don't want it to come across as that, but I also would like to see some more believability in the story. On a happier not, I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a helpful review!

I definitely know what you mean about Ginny and Harry -and I plan on clearing their actions up in the next chapter...You'll definitely be seeing a more disappointed Ginny, I'm trying right now just to portray her as just being plain shocked by her daughter's actions.

Thank you for your feedback on Lily: I really appreciate it! I'm going to really work on balancing her sphere of influences...I mean, on one hand, as you pointed out, she grew up with Harry as her father. But on the other hand, she grew up kind of like a mini celebrity, which I think could contribute to her feeling entitled.

Thank you! you've given me tons to think about!

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