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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow.

This chapter gave me chills. (again) The way it was written, though, with the italicized sections alternating with Flitwick and the Grey Lady. It was so perfect. I could hear the theme from the movie in my mind and I could just see this all playing out. I really love how everything came together in this one chapter. Ravenclaw seems to go fairly unmentioned in the final battle, except for Luna, of course, and you managed to show some great Ravenclaw moments. My favorite has to be Penelope saving Cho. I love how you showed that you don't have to fight to be a hero.

And then the last part, with Luna and the blue iris, just wow. It was so Luna~ish, first of all, which in itself is hard to pull off, but it was beautifully written. I love that you even gave Myrtle a moment in there. And then Luna's ending speech for Roger, um, I can't even describe it. The line of Latin (that is Latin, yes?) and its beautiful translation, along with Luna's simple way of stating things exactly how they are was perfection. And while we're on the subject of lines I love, the first line of this chapter was one of my favorite as well. Wait, no, it's the second line. That's really a great metaphor. You wrote this so well.

And on a happy note, ONE CHAPTER LEFT! :D I'm so proud of all you lovely Ravenclaws you have contributed to this!

-Naida

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