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Review:LovlyRita says:
So you were talking about having a Rose/Scorpius the other day and I absolutely just had to come see what it was about. Like I think I've told you before, I love to see what men do with romance, because it's so over done when girls write it. In addition, this is my ABSOLUTE favorite next gen pairing, because it's the Dramione that COULD happen hahaha.

So, I like the start here, it's definitely good, and I'm excited to see where you take it. I find it interesting that Scorpius was so close with the potter kids growing up, given their father's distastes for each other, but then, anything could happen, couldn't it?

I think that if Draco got angry enough, he absolutely could offer an ultimatum to Scorpius and try to bend him to his will. Good job portraying that.

I have one eensy..weensy...little...syntax...thing. The first paragraph, while written well and very descriptive...has the same first word over and over again "He." That's my only complaint with this story so far hahaha. Using the same word to start each sentence in a row. But other than that, it was great!! I can't wait to read more and see what you come up with!

Author's Response: YAY Thanks for reviewing!

Where I'm taking it? Sadly at the minute, it's not going hugely far, although I do have some of the next chapter written. When I finish it is anybody's guess. :P

I think it's possible they became friends, I mean, after all, the War was 19 years before Albus and Scorpius were first years, so I guess it's possible. But I see your point- it's quite hard to predict what would've happened...

Thanks for pointing that out about the repeating 'he'! I'll watch out for that writing in the future!

Thanks for the review, and hopefully I'll be ready to update soon!

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