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Review:Siriusly3 says:
Right, time for my supermassive ultimate review. I love this story! I'm angry that you did the gravestone thing because I was waiting for Hugo to die the whole way through. Thank god he didn't! I love the pairing because I've never read anything about these two and I think if they can get the whole Lysander learns to say no thing under control then they are sorted! Ah I'm so reading the sequel.
It flows really well, I like the dialogue-description ratio, it suits the tone of the story although ordinarily I prefer more description I didn't here. The little twists and all the mystery are amazing! I think the only thing that could have made it better is a little more background on William Rayner and the gang he has because at first when Hugo had the tattoo I was a little confused and then I remembered who they were. The mystery surrounding Hugo is good but the story feels short, I wish wish wish it was longer, the action scene later and it fleshed out a bit. I'm just being picky with my CC ignore me because I honestly adored it! 10/10!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're angry, I would have been too if I had been reading it. But... That was the point, to wonder if it was Hugo. *hides*

Yes, thank God he didn't... Though he was meant to. But ghost Hugo for the sequel just didn't seem as good... Yes, that was my reason for letting him live... :P

What you don't know now, will be known in the sequel, like more info on the gang. Because they have to investigate, for reasons you will know soon, and Lily knows... Everything (there is not just them two in the sequel. It'll be longer, too).

Thank you so much for reviewing them all! The sequel will be out soon!

Sam.


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