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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
I like Victoire! Usually when I see her, she's an ice queen, so it's lovely to see someone so flawed and down-to-earth. She's got a humorous voice; I love her internal banter and enjoyed listening to her feel sorry for herself. She sort of wars between not wanting to be given handouts because of her last name and wondering why things aren't exactly going her way because of her last name. Or so it seems - I can't tell because this is just the first chapter. But so far, she's hilarious and a bit pathetic in that I-have-absolutely-no-idea-what-I'm-going-to-do kind of way. I can definitely relate. Here is Sara, her future all laid out for her, and Victoire hasn't got a clue what she's going to do after Hogwarts.

Speaking of that, I love that the world does not worship her just because she's related to famous people. It makes her so much more real and multidimensional. I like that BIMAS is being iffy and they're waiting to see if their first picks will go with them before giving Victoire a concrete 'yes' or 'no'. Now that I'm so curious about what's going to happen to her, I've got to read on! Excellent first chapter, I enjoyed it very much.

Chapter Two ahoy! ~

Author's Response: Hi there!

You are so right about Victoire - she does war with herself. She's aware enough to know she gets some things because of her looks/family connection, but also aware that she has earned and worked for things just like everybody else. She's ticked when she doesn't get full credit, but she has this little inner voice whispering that what she actually does to earn those things doesn't matter as much as what people perceive. She's basically a big bundle of bravado and insecurities.

She's awfully fun to write. :)

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