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Review:Mischief_managed18 says:
hahaha I absolutely love/ hate cliffhangers. I use them ALL the time, so I can't really hate writers when they use them. It's all... BAM! Suspense!

YAY!! I was mentioned in the author's note! I'm honored. :)

Okay a few things before I get to the review itself, it's actually spelled Ouija.. It's the French and German words for yes (Oui) and (Ja).. People are weird and that's what they named it.
*end rant Ouija boards* Few other typos and grammar issues, but overall quite well done.

REVIEW TIME!

I really enjoyed this chapter. It went by too fast, and I'm really interested to see where this goes. I absolutely love Hermione. Gahh, she's amazing. I like your idea of Hermione. She's self-conscious in the right amounts and she's just so... awesome? haha

I can't wait to really get to know these knew characters, I like Jared a lot but the twins seem... suspicious.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, so off I go!

Keep up the good work m'dear. :)

Until next time,
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Oh goodness, I feel stupid Mischief_ managed, I put the wrong response to the wrong review. This is what I get for responding on my phone :/ Okay so here's, if you don't mind the response to your review on chapter three.

Yay! You're not just interested your super interested! Evil typos... I'll fix them soon.

Could he have taken it? Hmm... I wonder. Or maybe it dropped on the beach... hmmm.

Oh, you should read it, if you like swords and ships, likeable villians riding the fence, and vampires. I hope you like where it's going, because you are a amazing reviewer.

I'm writing chapter 4, and working out some kinks, so probably some time next week. If you're interested, I have a new story up, In Need of a Hero.

thank you from the bottom of my heart,

jaz xoxo


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