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Review:SunshineDaisies says:
What a sweet story!

I think your characterization was really good! There was definitely a firm knowledge of each of their personalities. There's a little room to develop Daphne, and I think that will add a lot to the story.

I definitely found the whole thing believable, especially around sixth year, with Draco not talking to Pansy. Of course, we know that there was so much more going on in his life than they were aware of.

Great work!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you for coming by!

I'm very glad the characterization worked for you. Granted, this was only a one-shot, so I probably won't put too much more into it, but if I write Daphne again, I'll definitely keep your advice in mind.

I'm also pleased that it seemed to be a believable pairing and that the time frame made sense to you.

Thanks for your very kind review! :)

-Amanda


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