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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I really like your first chapter! It really starts off by giving us this huge mystery about what happened to her that caused her this great embarrassment and really keeps us interested to try and find out what happened and then who is this boy that she mentions! It was wonderful and very enjoyable. I loved your characterization of her so far as well she seems like a very strong character, already knowing what it is she wants to do with her life and being able to pursue it so much. Even the strongest characters have their moments of weakness. Also I loved your description in this chapter as well! You did a great job with your story and I'm really interested to see where it goes from here! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have to have mystery in a first chapter. I can't tell you the story straight up :P That would be no fun. (I really should have just put the ship in the summary. So many questions about HIM! :P) She is relatively strong, though I'd describe her more as stubborn. Very stubborn. Thank you for the lovely review!

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