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Review:Siriusly3 says:
I LOVED THIS. The progression of it was gorgeous and I love Pansy/Daphne. It makes me feel like Slytherin's have hearts after all and I feel so sorry for them both the whole way through. And the Acid Pops and the dress and how they kind of tie it together. What I don't get is when Lucius is in prison and then does he get out of prison to have tea with Pansy? Or are they different time frames? If they are I would consider putting some kind of date on each little paragraph. Either way a totally engaging and lovely one shot!

Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for your review!

I'm glad you found some pity for the two of them, and that you liked the progression from childhood until the rougher adolescent years.

They are in different time frames -- the section about having tea was supposed to be set in fifth year, whereas the main storyline takes place during sixth year after Lucius has already been imprisoned. I'm sorry that confused you, and if I get more comments like this one, I will definitely look at making the time jumps a little clearer for the readers.

Thanks so much for your kind review! :)

-Amanda

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