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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
This was also so brilliant! It was wonderful to see Barty shine, and to be shown what Flitwick saw in him from such a young age. I love how we can see hints already of who Barty will become; the curious flashes are very telling.

It's wonderful to see how intelligent Barty is too, and how he shines even amongst Ravenclaws. It also makes Flitwick shine, just subtly, in the way that he knew how to steer Barty - as in, to help the other students so that both Barty and whoever he is tutoring feel encouraged.

Already, the continual solitude of Barty (and the slightly scary expressionless face he wears when thinking alone) is worrying. I feel so sorry for him, and I just wish he had a friend! But the subtle hints that Barty was always /different/ from the other students were wonderful, as they implied that truth but didn't outright state it.

Also, I loved the bit in italics at the end. It was really enticing to read on, and made me so eager to find out what happens - it is brilliant teaser to remind the reader that there is much more to come!

Ooh, I so wish I could read the next chapter already :3 10/10!

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