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Review:MiSTY_VoLPe says:
meh... it was ok...



JUST KIDDING I LOVED IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
when i saw this had been updated i practically squealed form joy...actually i did...in the middle of class...just ask any of my friends if you dont believe me!
a few things i loved:
- Al! he is amazingly adorable and i want my own real life version of him! i think he and i would be very happy together ;)
- Lucy- shes so innocent and happy and nice and i love how she loves animals! ( i can relate to loving animals)
- the flow of the story- it flowed really well and wasnt slow or boring anywhere!
- the ending- great way to wrap up the story while having links to the next one!
- the title- i feel it summed up the story nicely
- YAY YOURE DOING A SEQUEL!!! hehe cant wait
- Al point of view- great because we can see more into his character- also love the title!
- how the story is more than one plot- there are many smaller plots going on
- how all of your characters are unique and deep
- alice- lol in this chapter she was soo brave and that was cute
- the overall cuteness of the story! hehe made me laugh all the time!
-pippa- liked her character and eager to read more about her
-fred- soo funny!

those are just some of the many million things i loved but i have to stop listing them now cuz im meant to be doing an assignment (that is due tomorrow...yippee gotta love year 10...) and i've barely started.

and i'll try read more of matters of the hart soon!
well my dear fellow Aussie i am off to do a celebration dance to sad music! (reference to my review for chapter 19 :P )

333.3/10 (three is my favourite number in case you havent guessed)

cheers MiSTY

Author's Response: 3 is my favourite number too! Well 3 and 8! :)

Thanks for the lovely long review, it made me smile like this :D I'm touched that there were so many things about the story that you liked, it's such great affirmation for me as a writer to hear all that stuff, so thanks heaps!

The new story is up, it's called 'Human Nature', it's the one from Al's perspective so go and check it out :)

Thanks again for the review! xoxo


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