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Review:Aspiring author says:
I've enjoyed your fanfic so far! I think that you are very creative.
I would like to share some information with you though... For example, "you are" is contracted as "you're", not "your". You've done that throughout all seven chapters so far.
Another thing to note is your use of "apostrophe s" ('s). The apostrophe s means possession or contraction of the copula "is". For example, you would say, "That wand is Harry's" because Harry owns the wand. Or, you might say, "Harry's really brave." Where the "apostrophe s" means that "Harry is really brave."

Just watch out for those grammatical errors. They are simple to fix, but when left in the story they can really distract the reader from your story.

Good luck. Keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Also thanks for the corrections. While I am not planning on going back and editing until the entire story is done, I will keep these in mind when I do edit and as I continue to write future chapters.

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