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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Hey! Saw this in the Slytherin news thread and had to check it out. And can I just say how much I loved this. I loved the constant dilemma of Pansy wondering how to get Draco back and the flashbacks to other times, and Daphne's dislike for Draco. I think this was wonderfully written and I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the idea of Daphne being in love with Pansy and too shy to say so, and then finally the end where she gains the boldness to just kiss her and see what happens. And I love the happy ending and how Pansy finally realizes that Draco isn't worth the bother anymore and decides to be done with him and move on. You did a great job on this, I always love reading your stories.

xxEnigmaticEyes16

~green with envy 2012~

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming by :)

I'm very glad that the flashbacks worked for you, as well as my characterization of Pansy and Daphne. It was a challenge to make Pansy go a little deeper than I usually write her, and Daphne was fairly new territory as well, so it's great to get good feedback there.

I started to feel sort of bad for Pansy toward the end of the series, what with Draco getting caught up in his mission and ending up with Astoria, and I feel like we don't get much of an explanation. Pansy was never particularly likeable, but it was nice to give her and Daphne a happy ending here :)

Thanks so much for your very kind review!

-Amanda


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