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Review:accioHPFF says:
KEELY!

As you know, I've just seen this updated and wow, I really enjoyed this chapter!

I can see some similarities between this and The Human Factor, because I get the feeling that there are some things about Albus that you're holding back on. Maybe I'm wrong, but I did get that feeling- although of course, Albus is seen to be a lot friendlier in this.

I really like the way you wrote about "The Heaven Hotel", although I don't think I'd want to stay there myself. :P I think it's really interesting how you wrote about her expecting to miss it, even though it's this horrible place.

At several points in this, you made me laugh with this, especially with the hostility from Scorpius. I think James is probably my favourite character of the three, although I'm sure my opinions will change as you reveal more.

I know that more will be revealed through the story, and I can't wait to find out more about Chandler and her past!

Author's Response: Hey :) I'm so glad you liked this chapter, I'm always unsure of everything! Yes. There is a lot of things that are being held back on. Albus isn't as messed up as THF Albus, but he has his own secrets. There are some differences but some similarities, I guess.

Haha, I really wanted to show that it wasn't a great place, but Chandler loved it anyway. She likes the simple things, she's used to surviving on minimal things and doesn't need much to be happy. But you're right, I wouldn't want to stay there either.

Haha, James aye? And it's so much fun writing a grumpy Scorpius!

Yes! There will ;) Thanks so much for the review! I hope you have a wonderful day and I'll try to update soon! xxx


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