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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
I shall feed your review box like you fed mine ;)

I really like the progression you showed in this. Andy's progression from child to eleven year old was done really well, and I loved her emotions when Bella was leaving. The part with the necklace especially was gorgeous. I love how sisterly that was, and it makes it so painful to know what happened to the 2 sisters later in life. Cissy was adorable as well.

I think you've also managed to express the life of the Blacks in general perfectly. It's fresh and interesting from a lot of stories I've read about them, especially concerning their relationship. But I don't think Bella and Andy would be at odds. It makes more sense that Andy's morals would begin to change once she got to Hogwarts.

Another lovely chapter. Update soon, yeah? :)

-Naida

Author's Response: Review boxes happy all around!

I'm glad it seemed to make sense! It's sort of a big jump to make, so I was hoping that it wouldn't seem too awkward. I'm not really looking forward to having to write their falling-out, to be honest. :P -hides-

(maybe I'll just make this an AU where everyone lives happily ever after?)

I just can't quite see them /never/ getting along at all. I think they were a complicated group of people, which makes it terribly interesting to write :D

(now I really am tempted to make this AU and have them be happy forevers)

Thank you very much for the lovely review! ♥ I shall do my best.


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