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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Wow, Missy, you never fail to amaze me.

I love Snily, but I typically only like it when it's unrequited, so this was a bit of a change for me, and I loved every word. I think my biggest problem in Snily where Lily and Snape are together is that James Potter is so easily forgotten. He's thrust away, or he's killed off, just to make room for their relationship. In this, you've managed to have the two men coexist. I really like that Lily acknowledged her love for James, and the line where she said "I forgive you" was so simple and sweet. Lovely.

I also really like the repetition of green and light. The small foray into the living world, with Harry's eyes resembling Lily's, was absolutely gorgeous. I really love how you tied this in with the events in canon, and that passage completed the story.

Your imagery and style was impecable, as always. Another excellent one shot to add to your collection :D

-Naida

Author's Response: NAIDA!

Sorry for the ridiculously late author response.

YOU'RE MAKING ME BLUSH, stop it! You are one of my biggest supporters, so thank you. You're the best.

It's hard to write ships where there's already this deeply ingrained relationship in the way. I wasn't sure what to do with Lily when I put James and Sirius together, at first, but then it just really worked out well for me when I sent her off to be with Snape.

Lily still loves James, and she will always love him, but there comes a point where she realizes that he isn't first her heart, and she isn't first in his, and she needs to move on.

I always tie things in with canon, you should know that by now. :P

Gah, thank you so much for the lovely review. You're fabulous.


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