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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Dun, dun, dun... What a cliff hanger, that's like something I would do! I love this chapter, it is beautifully written and I like that we got some from Draco's point of view. Your characters have such amazing depth to them as well. Poor Astoria, how could her father do that to her? Looking forward to more, curious to see Blaise's reaction when she shows up on his doorstep (and I totally guessed that's where she was going to go). Please update soon,

GirlOnTheSidelines.

(P.S. Have you ever thought of getting banners for your stories? They attract more readers and really set the mood for your story... I love them.)

Author's Response: Hello!

It is a bit of a cliff hanger but I had to do it, I felt like the story was going in a straight line for a minute. Thanks for the compliment, I took my time with this chapter because it was so important to the rest of the story. I tried not to rush it and I just sat there and scowled into the depths of my computer screen. When I wrote this, my writers block was gone and ideas were shooting up from every angle of the universe. For some reason, this idea that I settled on just blew into my brain and latched on more so than the others. Did you like Draco's POV? He actually does have a sense of humor and everything and I thought I'd show it in this chapter. He found out a bit more about the Greengrass family too and you know their secret! How'd you feel? By this point its pretty obvious what most of the secret is, anyway, hahahaha.
Astoria's dad is not a pleasant man (Draco thought he'd buried his parents in their back garden and he may not be wrong, actually.)
Hahah, it was pretty obvious where she was going to go. The girl has no friends and her family is so bizarre that I couldn't have her randomly showing up on some person's doorstep. You guys would have been like, "WHO?!" and I've got most of the next chapter up, Blaise's reaction is as odd as he is. Hahaha, I loove that guy.
To your P.S.: I have thought of adding banners but I don't know how its done and I never get past that stupid code thing on the forums to get an account. If you know how to do all that stuff, let me know! It'd be very appreciated!
Much love,
Gabbie


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