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Review:starryskies55 says:
BEHOLD, THE CHALLENGE-MASTER IS HERE! COWER IN FEAR, MERE MORTAL.

I laughed all the way through this. It was great!

(just before I forget, the spacings are slightly annoying but not enough to be unreadable. Just me being pernickety and excessively annoying :P)

Steven's characterisation is brilliant, and you've worked in most of my points effortlessly. It reads fantastically, and I love Lucy's character as well- their banter is fantastic. And this line: 'as my academic life flashed before my eyes'- I love it to pieces.

Looking forward to chapter two, and well done! I'm glad you entered :D

Author's Response: *bows down* Ahhh the Challenge-master! I bow before your greatness.
Yay I'm so glad that you laughed at this, it was so much fun to write I love writing Steven.
(Don't worry I've edited the spaces so hopefuly they're not too far apart anymore :-D)
I'm so so glad that you liked Steven and Lucy in this *phew* I'm so glad that they connect so well and that you like how I included most of your points, I shall be including more as the chapters go on.
That's one of my favourite lines in this hehe.

I shall be writing the next chapter soon, your challange was so much fun!! :-D
Thanks for the review challenge master!


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