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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
I think this fic is written in a beautiful and soft language, almost poetic. Some parts of it would work as poetry as well.

Personally I'm not very fond of second person's view. I am not sure if this style of writing really adds anything that couldn't been accomplished in first or third person's view? But that's just because I don't like second person's view very much...

I like that you tell us about different times and different relationships of Remus's life. He is a complex character, and he had a difficult life.

Over all I think your fic is sad, but beautiful and filled with emotions. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Yeah, second person narrator... I don't know about it either, but it was fun to write in, I think. I'm so happy you liked how I portrayed Remus - I always found him difficult to write - so complex and haunted... Thank you for reviewing!

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