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Review:Snapdragons says:
Poor hungry grey box. :( I shall do my best to ease its hunger.

I like Lily lots and lots! ♥ And I love the depiction of the Potter and Weasley families. It just seems so... natural, if that makes sense. I liked it. Sometimes they feel weird in other stories but I was reading this and it sort of reminded me of my own sort of nutty family and yes I liked it PHEW.

Also on the topic of realistic stuff I liked: Hogwarts and her friends and all that! -shifty eyes- Normally train rides seem to be filled with professions of love etc and personally, I think Quidditch is a worthier pursuit/better conversation (I'm such a romantic) but it just felt like a lovely first day back at school. Once again, my compliments are coming out sort of funny (what else is new) but I enjoyed your Hogwarts - and thank you for putting Peeves in! PEEVES! Poor Peeves is not very loved in fanfic and it makes me sad. :( Because he's funny. Tears.

And yes, I found it funny! She's a funny girl, that Lily. ♥ I'm still not sure of who HE is (definitely deserving of caps) and this makes me quite anxious to read some more, so I guess you'll just have to post a new chapter soon. -whistles- lovely job! :)

Author's Response: Hannah! I'm so glad to see you back :D

I'm really glad you like Lily. The Potter and Weasley families were actually pretty difficult for me to write, as all my extended family is still back in India, so it's nice to hear that came across well :) It's always nice to hear that it feels natural!

See, and I didn't even /think/ of having the train ride be anything other than Quidditch and the Memorial :P The one thing that's good about me not having read a lot of Next Gen is that I'm very unfamiliar with how the stories typically go, and I think that if you've seen a general pattern, it's very hard to break out of that. You do it almost subconsciously :P PEEVES SHOULD BE MORE LOVED. I'm tempted to write a Peeves-centric fic now. Oh dang, GO AWAY PLOT BUNNIES.

HE will be there next chapter! (I think. Don't come after me with pitchforks if he isn't :P)

Thank you again for this lovely review!

-Naida

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