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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi!

So when I saw this initially, I became determined not to use the letter e in my review either, just to see how hard it would really be, but then I couldn't even right one sentence without it :P I mean, even the word "review" has the letter e in it. And if I told you I intended to write this sans e, I would be using e.

But after trying for a good five minutes to write a single sentence, I've become SO impressed at how hard it must have been to write this story. You couldn't even use the word "the"! It's incredible, to see all the beautiful word choice and imagery. It's hard enough to find the right words when you don't have to worry about a letter, but to do it all without the letter e is absolutely amazing.

And the content of this piece is lovely as well. I'm a huge fan of Snily when the two aren't actually together (basically anything where Snape is pining for Lily :P) and this was so captivating. I love how Snape didn't really blame Harry in this. It was more of a sad understanding that his pain was his own fault. And the end, when he said he would join Lily in death some day, I just got chills.

Lovely last sentence too, by the way, I'm so glad Always isn't spelled with an "e" :P You can't have Snily without sneaking in an Always somewhere!

Great one shot. You've done so many difficult things at once, and pulled them all off perfectly ♥

-Naida

Author's Response: So sorry for the wait in responding to this! School's been unbelievably like whoa this week, but I've tried to sort everything out. All in due time! Anyway, I am here now. :3

Abstaining from using E is so difficult! :P I couldn't say Snape, James, the, mother, father, be, or basically any past tense verb... I shall never take them for granted again! I would have been duly impressed had you managed it, and anyway, it's the thought that counts. :3

I am so glad you enjoyed this! 'Always' deserves an award for not having an E in it. :D And oh my gosh, did I really give you chills? I am so ecstatic now. You have made my day. ♥ Thanks so much for swapping with me, and for leaving such a lovely review -- I appreciate it very much!

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