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Review:hollysmith says:
Hi! I really like this story. Lenny and Sirius are really cute and good for each other. Just one critique: You should work on your Britishness. Thanksgiving is an American holiday and is not celebrated in the UK. I was also a bit confused about the timing of everything. She met with Teddy in the middle of the night then ran to Hogsmede. Then started drinking at 11am? I'm guessing. I just felt like I missed out on a lot of hours. She wouldn't have been able to go shopping until morning.

Author's Response: You're absolutely right, ohmygosh! That thought didn't even cross my mind when I was writing. I'm going to go change that right now to...err... Boxing Day? Something like that. Okay, so let me explain the timing. She met Teddy at 5 am and ran to the passageway around 515-530. It took her a good hour and a half to get to Hogsmeade and into the streets undetected. She went shopping for the new outfit at 7. By 11 (once she was done shopping and the pubs were open), she started drinking and just didn't stop. Kept going until late into the night. Does that clarify it a little? I hope so.

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