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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:

This one shot was amazing. Your description was lovely and your vocabulary was equally impressive. You pulled off the quidditch game perfectly.

The fact that we don't know exactly who the narrator was made the entire thing better. The story became more about what was happening rather than who it was happening to.

I only saw one spelling issue. you wrote"The crowd crew mind-numbingly loud " I'm pretty sure you meant the crowd grew because that would've made a lot more sense.
Other than that the grammer was pretty good(not that I'm exactly a grammer expert)

Very well done one shot. I'm pressing the favorite button right now cause it was just that good

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think the game was pulled off nicely. So happy, I had to hold back a squeal of excitement. Writing the game was difficult for me, to say the least.

I'm relatively embarrassed by that mistake, haha. I'll fix that now.

Thank you for taking your time to review!


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