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Review:Miriel says:
Ah.That was so cute! I think you use your gemstone very well! YOu put in everything, from the meaning of the ruby to Hermione's reaction and the naming of the baby...It was perfect!

I loved the way you described Ron's behaviour during the delivery...Walking in and out of the room and so on was a typical thing to do for a man. :) The attendan at the reception was a very nice add, too.

There's something I missed, though. Why didn't Ron inform Hermione's parents, too? That would be a nice add, maybe, because I don't see a reason why he shouldn't and it seems a natural thing for me to do.

Anyway,I think you did very well here! Good luck for the challenge!

Love,
Miriel

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad that you liked it. I am glad to hear that I used the gemstone well and it wasn't too subtle.

I figured I had to give Ron his moments. =)

Oh, they were included in the sea of red, black and blonde haired people that swarmed him. When Ron sent the Patronus to his parents to tell everyone, Arthur was the one to contact Mr. and Mrs. Granger. I should probably have put in the end when the Weasley Potter clan come in the Granger name in there. I will have to change that.

Thanks for the luck and compliments. I hope it does well in the challenge we shall see.

Thanks again,
-SR17


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