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Review:Pixileanin says:
"His oblivity was almost laughable and I wouldn’t want him any other way."

This sentence made the whole fic come together for me. I think if you hadn't put it this way, I would have questioned Lily not even trying for what she had wanted in the first place. I kept thinking, "Why would she not trust someone she'd known for that long with the truth?" I like the ending, how to Lily, she has made up her mind and was willing to live with her decision, yet the action, or lack of action in the story speaks to me of the possibility that things might still change in her favor at a later date. It gives the reader hope that he won't always be as oblivious as he is in this moment. Very well written one-shot!

Author's Response: Hey :) Sorry for the late response!

That sentence to me I loved writing because I agree that if that wasn't the case then Lily shouldn't have kept quiet! There is a possibility they could get together and that's really the way I wanted it! I have never thought of Lily and Lysander apart! Thank you for the review!

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