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Review:HP fan fic critic says:
Well...It's been a while since I read a fan fiction. I think the last time I read one was in 2009.
Anyways, there were a few minor typos here and there.
There are too many British slang.
The story line was really good. The amount of action and romance was just the right amount. There are some chapters that was pretty boring but there are some chapters that are so exciting I refused to go to bed. You are quite good at ending a chapter at climax, making me stay up another 30 min to keep reading.
You incorporated most of the main characters. However, you didn't say anything about the Malfoys as they would have been trialed.
You made Harry hold out for sex for so long I was starting to wonder if he was gay. Also, you wrote this story as if everyone was on Ginny side telling Harry not to have sex with her. This is not how men thinks.
Finally, considering how you made me read through 45 chapters to the point where Harry and Ginny have sex, you could have at least described the sex in detail.
Overall, excellent story. I play to read your next book.
8/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
I do want to say that I did touch on the Malfoys. It was slight and in passing. Harry had to write up a deposition on his knowledge of the Malfoy's involvement. They also were a willing family to give up much of its gold to avoid going to Azkaban. (Narcissa's help in the forest was also a factor)
I didn't want to delve to much into Harry and Ginny's first time or even their second time. This fic skirted soft-porn and I didn't want to take it over the edge. Sorry if that disappointed you.


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