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Review:javct says:
Review swap!
I love a good unrequited love/angst story! (gosh, don't I sound sympathetic? haha) Seriously, this was a really good story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I've been sitting on the fence of this era for a while now but I think your story may have just tipped me over the edge and got me liking it :D

This was a beautifully written story and I loved how freakishly un-cliche'd the ending was :) I've read way too many unrequited love stories where they get together in the end (even in one-shots) and I feel like screaming sometimes. But when I come across a well-written story like this, with the same story line, I feel happy (Gosh, I sound like a real charmer don't I? Haha)

That last time was brilliant! It just added to the angst and drama in this story and that final paragraph, "love is putting that person before yourself so that's what I did." it was pure genius! I'm always in awe of writers who can pull off a one-shot which (if been given to a different author) could have been turned into a novella. Okay, i'm going to stop rambling now and finish this review off :)

All in all, fantastic story and thanks for making me like the next-generation (I could have just said that from the start and made you not read all of that nonsense)
Jaz

Author's Response: Hey thank you for the review!

I'm glad you liked the story! I hope it has converted you to next gen! I love writing next gen its actually amazing!

I'm glad you thought it was very unclique. That's the one thing I always try to avoid doing because so many people do the same thing which is why I really wanted to write about an unrequited love that didn't work out.

I'm glad you loved the last paragraph and thank you so much for all the compliments. They mean so much coming from a fab writer like you!


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