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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Oh what an interesting one-shot!

It was so interesting to see how Caradoc knew that he was doing something that Dumbledore and Mad Eye would disapprove of but he did it anyway because he was a Gryffindor.

I liked how careless you made the Death Eaters by them not realising that they were talking too loud nor that Caradoc was actually following them. It was really ice to see how kind you made him too with him trying to help the frail old man up which made his death even more horrible.

The fact that he knew he couldn't have saved Dorcas would have been so difficult but the facvt he thought about avenging her death was interesting as it showed that ratehr than running from the situation and saving himself he stayed in that situation to try and take down a few death eaters even if it meant his life was going to end.

I loved this!

Author's Response: Caradoc has so much potential as a character due to his disappearance, but I often feel he's forgotten or overlooked. I'm so glad that you found this interesting and refreshing, because I was quite worried about it coming across as boring, etc.

I'm so happy that you liked his characterisation! Both through helping up the old man, to his being a Gryffindor! I worked hard to try and get that right ^_^

Thanks so much for the review. It's hugely appreciated.

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