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Review:atellam says:
Here to review! ^_^

I love this, it's such a Ron thing to do, and I think you captured that perfectly. I could see the scene playing out in my minds eye and laughed at Hermione's sudden shift in mood, as it's so in keeping with canon.

I think you've done this brilliantly and I'm rather intrigued to see how this works to include James and Lily (I saw them marked as characters) and the Marauders Era (a particular favourite of mine :P).

All in all, fantastic charactrisation and just overall wonderful-ness.

Keep up the amazing work! ^_^
- Adele.

Author's Response: Hey Adele! Thanks for the review!

I agree that it is a Ron's thing to do! I tried to get it just perfect so I rewrote the scene so many times! Hermione is horrible to write, why I got the plunny to write a whole novel about her I do not have a clue!

I'm glad you think this is good! And I'm glad you're intrigued to see how this works because actually it's quite clever even if I do say so myself!

Thank you for the review!

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