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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
What a fun beginning to the story!

I'm adding this to my favourites most definitely! I love the way Teddy thinks this is going to be really easy babysitting the twins but I can say from experience it really isn't. I love how you make Rolf very concerned that Teddy is on his own!

The boys seem to be trying their luck already with asking to go to George's shop and then trying to get Teddy to let them stay up! It is perfectly believable for younger boys to do that!

The fact that Teddy thinks it is going to be simple seems to foreshadow the mischief! I actually love it!

Author's Response: It was so much fun to write this, I can't wait to finish it - there's gonna be so many funny moments (well, at least I hope they'll be funny).

Teddy thinks it's easy because he's babysat pretty much every child in Harry's family (the dreaded oldest child curse... LOL), but he's never had to look after the twins. They're like a scarier Fred and George, don't be fooled by the adorable smiles. :P

I use personal experience when writing children, mainly my little brother, so I hope them trying to stay up is believable. Haha.

Oh, Teddy doesn't know what's hit him. ;)

Thank you so much for reviewing this.

Sam.


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