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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Thanks for the review swap, I'm back for chapter 3!

Ben definetely seems like an interesting character, and I think the his backstory helps shed a lot of light on his motivations and how he came to choose the path of rebellion. He has clearly lost a lot at the hands of the vampires.

The situation with the rebels seems very interesting as well, and the plot has definetely thickened with Katrina's mysterius arrival. There has definetely been a lot of suspense built up, and the anticipation of the coming conflict is really building.

This is a very interesting world you've created here, and I like the amount of detial you've put into it. I'm just a little confused about where it fits into the timing of the HP universe. It feels like medieval times, is it around the founder's era?

Great job so far, the story is very gripping.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you as well for the review swap! I'd been meaning to get back to your story for quite some time, let me tell you! :)

I really wanted to portray that with Ben. His story is heartbreaking, and I wanted to show that his story truly shapes into the person he is. Another reviewer told me she'd like to see some more background on the characters so I've decided that from now on, I'll be interjecting little backstories for at least one character a chapter, so look for that if you continue on! :)

This era is actually set about 250 years after the epilogue, so quite some time in the future! Though I suppose it could work either way (to put it in medieval times or in the future) I felt like after centuries and centuries of being the underdog, it'd be more plausible for vampires to rise up so that's why I set it when I did!

Thanks for the lovely review! :)

~VioletBlade


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