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Review:Miriel says:
Hi,

here's Miriel again :)

Sorry again for missing you post in review tag...I surely didn't intend to do so!

So, like "Crushing Butterflies", which I reviewed earlier today, this is another story of yours with an unique point of view.

You do have a knack for missing moments or describing a situation from another persons perspective. JKR only writes about Herione writing to Victor, we don't know what her letters mean exactly to him. That's why I liked this story, it was a canon addition to something we already know.

I also noticed that you dwelled into Victor's view on Karkaroff, another thing that's missing in the books. It fits very well and is absolutely believable.

This is a beautiful piece of writing. Great job!

Love,
Miriel

Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry, no hard feelings :)

I really love writing "missing moments" and exploring alternative perspectives, so it's nice that you can appreciate that and feel like I do them well. I think Viktor is an interesting guy, and I always found his little crush on Hermione to be kind of adorable, so it was fun to explore it with this plunny.

That part was definitely neat to write -- I could imagine Krum having mixed feelings about Karkaroff. On the one hand, the man was a mentor and father figure for years, but on the other, he was a terrible example. His unexpected death must have made that dichotomy all the more complex for Viktor.

Thanks so much for your very kind review :)

-Amanda


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