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Review:Elenia says:
Heey, I'm here again, back for the last chapter (:

I really liked the part in Spain, that was very good and action filled, fit well with the previous chapters. But I'm a bit uncertain about the ending. I don't know, it just felt a bit sudden. I would've wanted to see what happened during the time between those two events, get to know what he was feeling. So I'd maybe try adding something there?

Other than that, I really liked your story, you've done a good job here. You're a good writer!

Take care and thanks for the swap (:


Author's Response: boo, I'm re-responding. I hit the wrong button and it disappeared :( anyway, I've been thinking of making this into a Novel, there's been quite a few people wanting more details lol.
Love your story too, I'll have to go back and review the last chapter :)
Thanks soo much for reviewing!

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