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Review:Elenia says:
Heey, I decided to start my reviewing from this chapter already (:

wow, I really like your story. The first chapter was very good, and the plot seems to be interesting. I liked your Sirius. He seemed to be in character, so good work there.

The flow is good I think. Few spelling errors here and there but nothing major, another read-through will fix those I'm sure (:

Pacing was maybe a bit fast. I would have wanted to know more what happened between the years he escaped Azkaban and ended up in Spain, but it didn't really bother me that much! Just a suggestion (:

Great work though, I'll continue reading now (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Thanks so much! lol my heart jumped a little seeing more reviews lol
I'm glad you liked Sirius :) being in character is really important to me so I appreciate it :)

Yeah, I'm considering making the story longer at some point, that the only reason I didn't list it as completed.
Thanks for reviewing!! :)


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