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Review:Maelody says:
Penny's hormones crack me up! lol And I thought the note was a nice touch. Hopefully we get to see Shell Cottage next time? I would love to see her introduced to his family (even though she practically already has?) That way she can see him meeting her family won't be such a big deal! :) Poor Alex, hopefully he gets over it soon. I have a friend just like him (actually, you have him down to the very last detail except for the Australian part lol). He never learned his lesson. Oh well. Great writing! Can't wait to see more! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Penny's awesome. I'm so glad I planned her pregnant, as her hormones make her way more fun. Not that she isn't fun... but the pregnancy thing make her a lot more indesisive which I enjoy writing!

And yeah, Shell Cottage is a breif mention, but in chapter 8 I may go into more detail on that :) And thats a good idea about the family thing! Fleur's fun to write, hehe.

Yeah, boys like Alex need a girl like Bea to tell him to SIT DOWN haha, he's a sweetie bless him, but a complete idiot. I'm not sure why I had to make him Australian, I'm sure all Australian boys are much lovelier than Alex was, but it fitted the plot better!

And I'm glad you know a boy like him (although I'm also not, it must be sooo annoying for you!) but it also means that Alex is real, not just a completely cliche ex-boyfriend :)

Thanks for the lovely review :)

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