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Review:justonemorefic says:
Hee Myra's rules of magic. I love the touches of domesticity. And cake. Always cake.

Mm Lily's lullaby. I love how all the little pieces make the world seem so fragile. From her off key voice to the shattered glass in the last chapter, to still absent protective charms.

Oh well now. Flirty and handsy and kissing and oh dear, do I have to cover my eyes? Oh my. Oh myyy, Sev your gentlemanly resolve is being tested! Well, about time!

You know, I get really really shy about these sorts of things xD not because I'm uncomfortable about the subject, but because I always feel like I'm intruding on a really private moment I shouldn't be watching. But this was too sweet. Snape's 'I love you' and Lily's slip of a 'darling' and that he KNOWS it's 'too soon' but he's all right with that. "I'm yours… Do with me as you please." asdfghjk

♥ I've never actually read Snape/Lily romance romance before as much as I love the ship (I love their relationship, but I stick to unrequited), but I think in an AU setting, I'd adore it, and I definitely adore it here :3

Author's Response: I'm glad this came off not too, well, you know. I dislike writing overly woo-woo scenes in fanfic (not only my RL spouse, but also my mom, are reading this offline!) and this is really the only one I've done thus far that's been posted. I figured after ~28 chapters these two deserved some happiness, even if they are going to tear their hair out about it afterward. (well, Lily will)

Imagining what Petunia and Sirius are going to say when/if they find out is giving me the giggles right now, that is going to be fun to write. I look forward to getting into the consequences of these two getting together before Lily was really ready to move on... but she was the driving force. Sometimes, looking for comfort, people move faster than they're ready for.

Lily's lullaby is "I Will" from the Beatles' White Album. :)

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