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Review:justonemorefic says:
Truth be told, Severus would rather be clucked at than shunned; he was relieved that his colleague had surmounted the awkwardness that ensued... Baww, I love this little thought of his. I think it shines a good light on what sort of position he's in, and how tenuous it all is.

Hee, McGonagall called Harry a poppet! And is already training him to be the greatest seeker ever, I see. You write them with such an effortless voice ♥ eternally jealous.

;_; Oh noes Melora. She's being swung around like she's, well, possessed. I wonder if her foot will need to be patched. It would be so Lily to try to take care of everything on her own, and then Snape to blame it on himself that he isn't trying harder to do the same. Why must you both try to carry such burdens on your shoulders ;A; (this is my WHY WAR, WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO GOOD PEOPLE anguish)

Cake! Ickle Harry to save the day with cuteness eheheh. And their bit of lingering at the floor ♥

Squee, I saw you posted another chappie today! :3 off I go!

Author's Response: Gina reviews, what a treat! Yay.

I forgot about fixing Melora's foot... whoops. I suppose Lily did it when she put the poor possessed thing to bed.

It's kind of fun to imagine what Harry will be like with a secure relationship with a loving mom and no Boy who Lived stuff to deal with. Probably he'll turn out quite differently than in canon!

I've always thought Severus & Minerva were quite good friends as teachers -- certainly his seeming betrayal in book 6 really hit Minerva hard, and she had a terrible time after his death (Snif!) when she realized she had misjudged him. She had the position of Dumbledore's right hand for the public eye while Severus was doing much of the dirty work behind the scenes. I think my Minerva kicks back against Dumbledore a lot more than she would in canon... that's my frustration talking ;)

Thanks again dearie!

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