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Review:RosieQueen says:
Such a fantastic, unique story! You portrayed the mood very well. I find it a bit depressing the wizards all died out! Vampires, oh how little Rowling told us about them. Yet something about them in the series made me quite curious. Somehow, this story greatly reminds me of the Hunger Games! Is that what you based it off on? I loved your description! The mental images were so vivid! Very good prologue, it's amazing, and it does a good job of luring readers into the story. Very few critiques am I able to make other than the fact that at times, it was just a teensy bit hard to follow. Anyway, wonderful chapter. I love your writing style! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) The Wizards didn't ALL die out, but most of them did or were turned into vampires. The ones remaining have weaker magic as they've lost spells and powers throughout the vampires' tyrannical reign. I know! She hardly mentions them at all, which definitely gives me free reign which is kind of a scary thing! But since they are hardly mentioned, I find them very intriguing! :)

I actually didn't base this story off the Hunger Games, but rather a short story called The Lottery. Have you read it? Completely and totally chilling! (And it came way before The Hunger Games!) But that is a compliment if my writing and the story reminds you of The Hunger Games as it's one of my favorite series! :)

Thank you again so much! Yes, it is a bit hard to follow but I didn't want to spell everything out in the prologue so I tried going the more vague route. I think it works, but yes, it can be confusing!!

This review made my day, so thanks so much for the swap! :D

~VioletBlade


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