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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
This was so sweet, but with a hint of something sad lingering on the edges. I think you did a really great job with Katie, here. You give us enough background from their younger years to see how her infatuation for Fred grew and you can tell that she's held a torch for him for a while. She speaks of him so fondly.

I actually really liked that you made it so she couldn't tell which twin was which from far away. It made it more realistic for me, I guess, rather than you saying she knew it was him right away because she was so in love with him, you know? But then George smiled and she could tell it was George. It was such a nice little detail.

You had my heart racing when Katie asked Fred to dinner. I was just waiting in anticipation for his response and then you had them just staring at each other - it drove me nuts! But then I could tell he was going to let her down, and I felt really disappointed until he invited her to his family's dinner.

I found her daydreaming about their wedding to be amusing, and so girlish. I also really enjoyed the contrast between Katie and Angelina, how one thinks that no time should be wasted and the other wants to wait until the war is over to pursue anything. It just makes my heart ache to think that Fred's the one not coming home in the end and so Katie was right to not waste any time.

Fred was great too. Eager and funny, but still sincere. I loved his little quip about his and George's best behavior being playing pranks -that just made me smile.

I'm amused that Jane read both our stories - she does a fabulous job, doesn't she? This was really great. Very well-written and like I said before, sweet. I enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response: This review totally made my day! Sadness is definately lingering on the edges for this couple and story. Oh you like my Katie! this makes me so happy! yeah I got help on the forums about twins and such and that was one thing someone said was that they do have small differences in like smiles or something and honestly i can't tell which twin is which! so I wanted to add that in there that from a difference she couldnt really tell which one was which.

I really wanted to show this difference between the two girls as some people do think that war means action you never know who will be around the next day so you need to do now what you can and then others who will push stuff off such as weddings etc. I'm glad you like my fred as well! Thank you so much for the kind words and for reading and reviewing!


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