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Review:abbynormalluvsluna says:
Yay for Abby :) she's pretty crazy awesome! I'm kinda conflicted about the Scorpius POV. On one hand I'm glad you didn't start the chapter with a heading reading "Scorpius POV" and it is always nice to gain a bit of insight into what another character is thinking. On the other hand, the writing in that part just didn't seem as natural as your Rose POV. It's probably just because you're not used to writing Scorpius. I would suggest editing that part. First, make sure you are sure on all parts of his personality and opinions, then try rewriting it without looking at the previous version. This story is really taking off. I'm so excited to be in it :D.

Author's Response: I completely agree about the Scorpius POV, but it was kind of necessary just to introduce his character a bit and understand his perspective. I much prefer writing from Rose's POV!!! And thanks so much for the suggestion to change it! I didn't even realize how awfully all over the place that was! I changed it and its undergoing validation as we speak! (or rather as I type I should say...). Anyways, I hope you like how I wrote Abby! She will hopefully end up playing a bigger role as the story progresses with the idea I have in mind, but we'll see. I prefer to write without really knowing exactly where its taking me. Thanks again for reviewing! You are once again my favourite person ever!

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