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Review:bri_5_stars says:
Despite this being a rather long one-shot, it is quite an easy read. You can really understand what Hermione is feeling her distraught and sad feelings after the war. Although it is a little odd that two people who've never held much concern for each other before, become so close so quick, I'm fairly sure weirder things have happened in fanfiction ;) There are quite a few spelling errors that you might want to take a quick read through to fix, other then that though this is a pretty good one-shot. Good job. :D
brithewriter (from the forums)

Author's Response: I know what you mean about the length, this story was incredibly easy to write and it just kinda flowed from me. I didn't expect it to be that long in the beginning so I was rather surprised when I put it in for validation and saw the word count!! I have to say that I'm really glad you pointed out how quick things happened, in my opinion they wouldn't have in a different setting but because Hermione was so emotionally vulnerable to anybody that would really be there for her I think it works alright :) I was a little worried about how fast things went when I began writing it though! I will make sure to go back in and search out those errors! Thank you so much! :)

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