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Review:Calypso says:
Ahhh this was great!! I love fics which centre round mother/daughter relationships and this one was really beautiful although heartbreaking in places.
You managed to convey Ginny's emotions really well and I think the way in which Lily's death affected her (like still talking to her, still going through her bedroom but also responding with anger and violence) was very real and very human. I really got a sense of the distress and injustice that Ginny was feeling. Also, you writing has a lovely flow to it which is very easy to get into and which carries the reader through the story.
I know you have mentioned that it wasn't originally a Harry Potter fan fic, but if I were to give a point for improvement it would be to try and open out her emotions regarding Harry, James and Albus a bit more and maybe develop that theme? I think that losing them would have had almost as much impact as losing Lily.
That said, this was an amazing story- you have a great imagination and writing style and made your characters really real :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, this really made my day!
I agree with you saying that losing her sons and Harry would have been just as hard as losing Lily but this fic is really concentrating on the loss of Lily. But I'll take that into account and maybe add more of that loss.
Thank you so much for taking your time to leave a review and for all the lovey comments! :D :D :D


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