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Review:severus478 says:
This is really interesting so far! I like your characterization of the different characters, as well as their crazy names. :) I find a couple parts of the story a little unrealistic, such as Lisa not knowing who James is (considering they've been at school together for five years and he is famous), but they're only minor. Anyways, great story so far, and update soon!

Author's Response: YAY for crazy names!!

It's not that she doesn't know the name but she doesn't care to think anything of it. She's kind of like a loner and not really interested in the day to day drama of things and takes the gossip that her friend Carly says as if it doesn't really matter. She's heard the name before but she doesn't really care to remember who he is or know him for that matter. She thinks of both Fred and James as one of the 'egotistical quidditch blokes' and feels that none of them need the attention of one girl.

James and Fred don't know her because she's the kind of person who hides in the corner.

I agree it is a little unrealistic that they don't know eachother but it's more like they didn't notice eachother.

Thank you so much for the review I hope this clears things up for you! Updates are coming and more about Lisa's past and her disinterest in the 'popular' ness coming soon!!!

Bella Bug

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